The Rendezvous has been written in five segments and in keeping with the Carrot Ranch Challenge formula, each segment is 99 words long. Here are Parts IV and V that may or may not be the conclusion. Read Part 1 here; Part 2 here; Part 3 here. I hope you’ve enjoyed the series.
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Officer Dufaux enters their suite.
He notices a trail of clothes leading to the bedroom, an empty wine cooler, a light jasmine fragrance, and a seemingly annoyed man facing him, wearing a hotel bathrobe.
“Monsieur, we’re investigating an incident that occurred in the suite below yours tonight.”
“What’s that got to do with us?” Alistair asks.
“We wondered if you heardꟷ”
Gloria drifts in from the bedroom in a partially buttoned man’s shirt, sliding her fingers through her tousled hair.
“Heard anything?” Dufaux says, with a slight grin.
“No.” Alistair gives Gloria a rapturous smile. “We were rather preoccupied.”
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Dufaux frowns. “Did you hear the gunshot?”
“Mon Dieu!” Gloria gasps. “What happened?”
“We’re still investigating.”
“Was someone hurt?”
“I can’t say. Now, did either of you hear anything?”
Alistair places his arm around Gloria. “Sorry, I didn’t hear anything.”
“Nor did I.”
“Thank you forꟷ”
“Is the shooter still out there?” Gloria points to the door.
“The incident is an isolated one so there is no danger to the public.” Dufaux opens the door. “Bonsoir Madam, Monsieur.”
Alistair pulls out his mobile. “I’ll let H.Q. know the police are gone.”
Gloria heads for the bedroom. “I’ll start packing.”
This would make a terrific movie.
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Thank you Ruth! Is there anyone you have in mind who could play the leads?
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The whole time I was reading, I pictured Angelina Jolie and Jason Statham.
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I like your choices… I could see them doing these roles. They could definitely pull it off and make the story very exciting on screen.
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What a wonderful page turner. I enjoyed every instalment.
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Thank you Amanda! 🙂
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I was visiting your website today. I thought your ‘The Rendezvous’ series was well crafted and very entertaining. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Thank you. I’m pleased you enjoyed the series.
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In the words of Paul Gardner:
A painting is never finished, it simply stops in interesting places.
So, that’s what we have here. Yay! ❤
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No! This can’t be the end!
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When is a story ever over? You would expect their intelligence agency to send them on another mission. So, you never know…
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